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All Deviations
All Deviations


Hearts broken, lying all around me
Tears always drowning me,
Friendships broken,
Broken promises, never made,
No more shoulders to cry on,
So many tears of shame

Friends burden me with troubles,
Responsibility growing rapidly.
Someone help me,
I'm about to break beneath the pressure.

Too much evil,
Too little light,
Too many little things to take everything away

Love no longer there,
Hearts no longer reach out to me,
People no longer holding my hand,
to bring love, joy, and comfort.

I'm sitting in the cold,
Drowning in my tears,
No ones trying to help me,
from escaping what I fear.

Love cut off,
No more joy,
No more anything for me anymore
©2005-2008 ~XfReEmYsOuLx
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i was bored earlier in the year so i sat down and tried to get all my emotions out on paper, this is what i came up with...
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~isolatedfantasy15:iconisolatedfantasy15: Jun 13, 2005, 6:59:07 PM
you have a unique style and i like that. I love your flow and the way you get the emotions blutly but artisticlay out

you have great potential, it reminds me of my eariler stuff, it'll grow, you're talented

:)

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Do What You Love & F--k The Rest
-Little Miss Sunshine
~kamatary:iconkamatary: Jun 16, 2005, 12:52:49 PM
ok its not my area but i can say it is very good ejjejeje
you have a lot of talent use it wise
do not get your talent burned

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plan is the assumption
that you know more
than your enemy
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~Nivyania:iconNivyania: Jun 26, 2005, 7:31:35 AM
It is wonderful. I like the flow and the words you chose to express it are perfect.

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